@JakeMorph
I think it was a mistake to not say in my og comment that well, you *can* adapt the story itself for sure, but it would need to be trimmed out a lot because of the sheer density of dialogue that flesh out jokes or characters or world, a lot would get lost. Its like trying to adapt House of Leaves or Stanley Parable
Thats why act 5 or 6 imo you just cant adapt them well enough unless they decide to do some crazy shit and spend like 4 seasons of 20-30 minutes episodes on those acts alone
These first two drafts rejected with a single written critique:
“It is rapturous still, the way you fill a page. I find it to be lacking.”