And yes, I'm with bluebootyraider, the dialogue is potentially a big problem. The trailer doesn't indicate much one way or another, but the dense, verbose language of the original just doesn't translate to spoken word, I've always thought it was crazy that people like dubs and let's-reads of the comic because they always sound so unnatural.
*rips off shirt revealing "I <3 UNNATURAL DIALOGUE" tattooed to my chest*
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a webcomic about boats and magic
and the indeterminable future.
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