agree with sbahj. PLEASE plan, please ask friends to read the plan for you. i don't want to be too much of a negative nancy but sometimes i write with my friends and they write can't as cant in a narrator section or introduce someone 200 pages in and it's like. this is why we read. and the more you do this the better your writing will get because youll pick up on it

as an avid mspfa reader this might be biased but as victoria said don't feel constrained by the form. i however mean this in a sense that. a lot of the things that sburb does have already been done dozens of times over and if sburb isn't a game you'd want to mess around with in its HS form anymore you can ALWAYS make a sburb-like and you can ALWAYS change the rules of the game. sure, one of your players playing an entry object could terraform their family's owned territory into what would be their land. the planet doesn't get destroyed. who cares do what you want it's your comic