ErisolspiteIs#1 -- oh yeah, this is the unrefined pilot version and i think it's a great starting point :) i like it already for what it is and i'm excited to see where they take it next! i don't think fanon is ever going anywhere though, or at least i hope not. everyone is entitled to their interpretations of the characters + fanworks don't have to submit to the authority of canon if they don't want to. DL;DR and all that!

DM and TG -- i'm glad to see both of you mention jade's little screentime, i felt a little bad not even giving her her own paragraph in the thread starter (^_^;) i have the same sentiment as above: it's just the pilot and i'm happy with what i got

didn't mention this in the opener but i was pleased to see that they lifted lines straight from the comic, too! obviously this has the benefit of being in-character because the character literally said that in original canon lolol. i'm not sure how many are direct quotes tho! i thought it was especially fitting to quote a rare "!" usage by dave (hope you like hammers dude!) since that lines up better with the emotiveness in the pilot.