I don't mind if updates take a while, I and most people would rather quality over quantity, people will just wait and then go hype when said thing updates again (For example, look at Deltarune)

I also agree with Teatime, think of that two cakes meme image, people just want cake lol

I really like the art style you use, it reminds me of the earlier acts of Homestuck (I mean this in a good way!) I think it makes your work more unique/stand out than just copying Hussie's art style (no offence to any that do that)

Idk what to suggest to improve writing wise bc I'm not a professional writer or anything myself, but the fact that you are even making something is an achievement in itself! Since I think most people just keep it in their ideas/stories in their head so actually putting stuff out there is again, great in itself