Share your MSPFAs for critique

This will function similarly to the MSPFA Discord Adventure Reviews thread. If you're not familiar, you leave your adventure link up (at least 50 pages are required), and others read it and give you constructive criticism. If you're not looking for that, this is not the thread for you, sorry.

I don't currently have an adventure up, but if you're looking for something to review right out of the bat, feel free to check out Gamma Session. It never quite got off the ground due to me not having planned out any of its late game and reusing a lot of Homestuck story elements to the point of excess, but I would be happy to get anything extra from it as well. https://mspfa.com/?s=62211&p=1