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Unnecessary use of back-ticks.
vwell i dont think theres anything sexy about being sexist but the matching pfp and banner is cool. 5/10
Re: cronusampora
Context: I added this after someone misread it and I thought it was pretty funny..
Removed.
wordathan i'll drop my review here
pfp and signature
very nice, i think they're pretty unique and stand out + got the gif amp so that's also a plus.
score: 8/10 (pretty nice)
bio
i think it's a mixed bag because there's some nice stuff here but a lot of it doesn't really have a lot of cohesion overall.
- the first bit is cool but i think its lowkey more forum sig coded than something for the bio
- 16m agedrop is fine but i think it just looks awkward because of the spacing relating to the lil dividing line: rtf not allowing anything super minute in terms of that sort of stuff hurts and it ends up feeling like there's a lot of deadspace
- tagline that says u make music but then the only link is to your tumblr: if you have a soundcloud/bandcamp or whatever i think you should also drop that first BEFORE the tumblr just for findability
- the stuff at the bottom is whatever but i think it could benefit from some italicization/bolding and a dividing line.
this is how i would (potentially) do your bio:
STARTS BELOW TILDE LINE
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I'm "screwSpike", but you can call me "screwSpike".
Have I said this before?
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16m. FRAF Award Winner.
I make music, by the way. Hopefully you're gonna remember that.
https://www.tumblr.com/screwspike/
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FRAF Awards
2025
FRAF's Best QA Tester Award
FRAF's 16-Year-Old Award
FRAF's Sexiest User Award
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ENDS ABOVE TILDE LINE
score: 5/10 (just average, has some nice details in it but i think could benefit from slightly better formatting)
overall score
6/10 - Not anything standout bad, moreso just average
Some notes if you want:
- I think having some images in general would help make it standout and give it some more life, below are some examples
* https://www.fruityrumpus.com/forums/p/andytheillusion
* https://www.fruityrumpus.com/forums/p/enderslime
- You could potentially experiment with some fancier dividing lines (as seen in enderslime's profile) although mostly up to you
- Links should always have their own little space to breathe in while still feeling like they blend in
the yung filipino prophet
