I quite liked it. I think some modern slang slipped into the show more than I'd prefer for having it set in 2009 (pfp rather than avatar and DM rather than PM, for example), but other than that, I don't really have many complaints. I really liked that it had WV at the computer to sort of bookend the pilot. With only 11 minutes, I thought that was a good way to hint at a larger story without being able to actually show it.