read through the story so far yesterday and it's pretty fucking rad!

love the inclusion of actual flash animations and games. Like, I was actually a little surprised when the Ruffle loading screen appeared. It reminds me not of Homestuck (surprisingly) but more of the flash sites I used to be enamored with when I was younger (...ok, not that many years ago but still) like HomestAR Runner and Stickpage (I was never a newgrounds kid, I just watched eddsworld on youtube). The whole thing feels like it was torn out of the internet 15 years ago and carefully preserved. can't tell if that last minigame is meant to be the end of Mitzi's quest, but if it is, that's a pretty funny way to end it. perfectly underwhelming choose your own ending bit! keep it up (or tell your art elves to keep it up... and maybe raise their salaries?)